Say Something ~ a tri-collaboration

God stands to look over his flock
His eyes watered, a tear welled
He remembered the beginning
He recalled the love that was put
Into creating a world, that lives and breathes
With life of every kind, one, with a mind
He bowed His head and He shook
He bit his lip, blood dripped
โ€œSay something, Iโ€™m giving up on youโ€
Wasted plea she whispers upon His crown
Starved by the flaccid attention He feeds His sheep
She licks the remains of their tithed release
Her faith diminished under the glow of his halo
Seeking salvation that He denies with feigned grace
Forsaken by poetic scripture He inks for them
She flees to the darkness under wing of another false prophet
โ€œI donโ€™t love you, but I always willโ€
Is what He sees and hears from above
His flock refusing His saving grace
Relying on themselves, shunning His love
Through the pain, realization comes
They are what He created, and given free will
As their Father, Heโ€™ll always love them
and the choice to accept His love, is theirs
โ€œSay something, Iโ€™m giving up on youโ€
The silence was deafening as thunder shakes
โ€œSay something, Iโ€™m giving up on youโ€
Tears fall as her scorned heart breaks
โ€œSay something, Iโ€™m giving up on youโ€
His heart breaks from their continued rejection
โ€œSay something Iโ€™m giving up on youโ€
I surrender in blood and ashes
As the angels weep tears of sorrow
Heaven and Earth stills in reflection


Written By in Collaboration
Dana ~ Love Letters Lost At Sea  ~  visit her blog here
Adhamh ~ Southside of Heaven  ~  visit his blog here
Ax ~ Perso~in~Poesia

Honor and Privilege are two words of many that can and does describe this post for me. To be able to collaborate with two extremely talented poets. Two poets I regard as Friends first and foremost. Links to their blogs are above, please, please visit for more magical rides from the depths of the sea to dream and to the sky’s above and beyond as far as we can see.

Dana, thank you for writing with me again. Humbled and grateful doesn’t cut it but I hope you know how I really feel.

Adhamh, our first collaboration and what better way than to slide along side our Lady friend. Thank you for sharing your talent and artistry.

Above Photo ~ Google Images

A Song
Say Something by A Great Big World

24 thoughts on “Say Something ~ a tri-collaboration

      1. You’ve done it again Antony and addressed me as a man ๐Ÿ˜ฅ
        Lol, it’s “ma” chรจre, but I totally forgive you because you make the effort to speak to me in my language. And because you’re awesome. That too ๐Ÿ˜‰ โค

  1. Reblogged this on Southside of Heaven and commented:
    I had the wonderful opportunity to partake in a collaboration with Ax and Dana. It was a great experience writing with both of these wonderful people and poets. I hope you enjoy the results as much as I enjoyed writing it with them.


  2. The three of you did a splendid job. The thing about free will is interesting because we often forget it’s our own to control. Oh and John Legend sat on my shoulder all the while reading this, but I’m not complaining…he was great in concert. ๐Ÿ˜‰

  3. I will be forever indebted to you for your friendship!! Thank you for allowing me to be a part of this amazing experience. I enjoyed being surrounded by such creative genius!! Smiles. I love you, friend!!

  4. Reblogged this on Love Letters Lost at Sea and commented:
    I am a very open-minded and adventurous soul, but never had the pleasure of a threesome — until now. And of course, it is a threesome of poets, intermingling our words and thoughts into one thought-provoking, touching poem. Thank you to Ax for considering me worthy of such an endeavor. You are truly a creative genius! And รdhamh, thank you for believing in me and reassuring me that I could indeed do this. Your writing always makes mine better. Please visit the original on Ax’s blog. โค

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