HALLELUJAH ~ acrostic


  
Home, is where my heart lays deep

Alone, beneath in wake or sleep

Left to dwell, to pound to beat

Lost in sorrow, darkness will keep

Everlasting hopes and dreams that seep

Love, to conquer do we weep

Unbridled joy, hearts will reap

Joined in spirits, joy of life as sweet

Announce my stand, to live a heap

Hallelujah, hailed by mountainside steep

Ax

18 thoughts on “HALLELUJAH ~ acrostic

    1. Wow. Coming from you it’s a gift. Your structured poetry is awesome. I don’t do them as they are to hard for me but got a lucky on this one
      Really appreciate your comment ๐Ÿ™โค๏ธ

      1. Your poetry is fantastic and I look forward to being able to spend more time reading it. You are kindly welcome and thank you, for the wonderful comment. I really didn’t write beyond free verse until about a year ago when I discovered the senryu and since then I gravitate towards the short forms. i don’t know if it’s because I connect with them or if I am too lazy to write longer pieces ๐Ÿ˜€

      2. ๐Ÿ™‚ you are welcome and thanks, again, for that. Yes, if I am ever in that part of Canada I will let you know I am coming that way. I was there in July of 1999, for a conference and loved it. The conference was in Victoria but I know there is a lot more to BC ๐Ÿ™‚

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