Welcome To Your Nightmare

Lullaby dreams do not exist
All the songs that will be sung
Are of darkness and misery
Welcome to your nightmare

The sun will shine, brighten up
This sweetly decorated room
With floating teddy bears and a bunny
Waiting to be hugged

It smells of lavender and talcum
Springs fresh new scent of life
Yet within these walls you, captured
Welcome to your nightmare

Rest you will when the light is bright
Strength recovered from the previous fight
By the glow of the moon or dead of night
Another round of fucking with your minds might

Counting the days that pass by
Memories being etched in time
Forever burned and carved into skin and bone
Welcome to your nightmare


hey guys. again, if you have critque, please, please πŸ™β€οΈβž°

8 thoughts on “Welcome To Your Nightmare

  1. First, read the other comment ive left on your previous one. πŸ™‚
    Ok now here I go again:
    I woke up this morning with a terrible nightmare. I was shivering. And now reading your nightmare poem makes more sense to me. Athough I do not know the reason behind the sudden change, I want you to know you are doing wonderfully well. Your earlier wishing upon a shooting star and this nightmare – both have a very fine quality about them. You have some serious talent.

  2. I can’t critique – I don’t care for form and you know it. I love words & words alone and these reach deep into my own memory banks. I love that about your gift.

  3. The subject and flow is great! My only critique would be to build in more structure…form and/or feet. However, your words are always fun to read…a real treat. πŸ˜ƒ

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